Viewing the footage we completed last time filming we felt that the lighting was a major problem, it just wasn't strong enough and affected the quality of the production. As we were already analysis it against the real media products we felt that the script posed a few problems too. The action looked messy with the characters confined in a small space speed-dating and there was too much narrative to edit to 5 minutes bringing us back to the drawing board to try to keep the story nice and simple while also following the short film conventions of adding a twist at the end. Before all the twists we had in mind posed cliches based on the the idea that it was all a dream but inspiration came from plays that use the idea of a play inside a play which sounded intriguing with the possibility to turning it to film.
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