Script Feedback

Asking our target audience their opinions on our script we received a few responses, but all positive with constructive feedback on what we could improve or develop. All liked the idea and thought the storyline was was funny but they had difficulty with imaging character as they wanted more detailed character descriptions and the use of parentheses so that they could understand the intention of the spoken word through they way the character spoke or looked when speaking. Another point was to add clear shot changes so that specific shots or camera movements are outlined.